Thursday, February 7, 2019
Choice of Words
Avoiding wordiness or unnecessary words
Do not use a phrase if a word will do:
e.g. Many students have a tendency to skim through the instructions on the test.
e.g. Many students tend to skim through the instructions on the test. (better)
e.g. I will show you the way in which to do it.
e.g. I will show you the way to do it. (better)
e.g. I will show you how to do it. (better)
e.g. The Senate did not pass the bill due to the fact that it was unconstitutional.
e.g. The Senate did not pass the bill because it was unconstitutional. (better)
e.g. You should take the advice given to you by your doctor.
e.g. You should take your doctor’s advice. (better)
e.g. I was supportive of your decision.
e.g. I supported your decision. (better)
e.g. The man conducted himself with irrational behavior.
e.g. The man behaved irrationally. (better)
Do not say the obvious:
e.g. Her hat was red in color.
e.g. Her hat was red. (better)
e.g. The basketball player was tall in height.
e.g. The basketball player was tall. (better)
Avoid unnecessary adjectives, nouns, or adverbs:
e.g. These are vital essentials of life.
e.g. These are essentials of life. (better)
e.g. Do not question his technique employed.
e.g. Do not question his technique. (better)
e.g. There is too much danger involved.
e.g. There is too much danger. (better)
e.g. The Congress would make decisions about changing the Constitution.
e.g. The Congress would decide on changing the Constitution. (better)
e.g. You committed an act of violence.
e.g. You committed violence. (better)
e.g. It took a long period of time.
e.g. It took a long time. (better)
e.g. It was clearly evident that he took the money.
e.g. It was evident that he took the money. (better)
e.g. Evidently, he took the money. (better)
Avoid constructions with it is … and there are …:
e.g. It is truth that will prevail.
e.g. Truth will prevail. (better)
e.g. There were many people inside the cinema when the bomb exploded.
e.g. Many people were inside the cinema when the bomb exploded. (better)
However, it is and there are may have their legitimate uses in emphasizing an idea.
e.g. It is the truth that we are seeking, not the myth.
e.g. Fortunately, there were only two persons inside the cinema when the bomb exploded.
Avoid excess use of abstract nouns:
e.g. The effectiveness of writing requires an element of conciseness.
e.g. Effective writing requires conciseness. (better)
Avoid flowery or high-sounding language:
e.g. now NOT at this point in time
e.g. nowadays NOT in this day and age
Copyright© by Stephen Lau
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